1) Point to two moments in the draft that you think are genuinely strong and/or interesting and express why you feel that way.
2) Point to any moment in the text where the chronology of events is not clear or where you wanted to see more writing at a specific moment.
3) Point to two moments in the paper where you think the writer could do a better job of SHOWING instead of telling – where more DESCRIPTIVE DETAIL is needed.
4) Ask two questions about the essay that you would like to know more about, that leave you curious or confused.
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