Essay 2 self critique



  1. Describe a moment in your paper that you spent time revising and felt the the revision made for a STRONGER moment in the paper. What part of the paper was it? What did you find unsatisfying about that moment or what wasn't working? What did you do in revising that moment? What kinds of considerations were you making? What specifically makes the revised section stronger or gives you a sense of satisfaction?
  2. Describe two specific moments or features of your writing that you think are least effective/need work. Explain your dissatisfaction. 
  3. Describe two things you learned or worked toward perfecting in this essay on Rhetorical Analysis. 

  4. In general, what is preventing your writing from being observably stronger right now? Specify two things that are holding you back from noticeably stronger writing.  What could you do to work around those obstacles or to solve the problems holding your writing down.