Things that make stories kinda shitty:
Flat tone: monotonous, lack of description, unstrategic or unnecessary repetition, sentence structure is repetitive.
Unclear or unspecific expression: lack of detail or specificity, no depth (nothing learned, states the obvious, lack of novelty), humor (?)
No tension : lack of a problem or struggle or suspense/surprise, a slow or bad plot (nothing interesting or important is happening)
No audience consideration : the story is not relatable (*) or uses a vocabulary (diction) not appropriate for the target audience.
Lack of PLOT SEQUENCE : the order of events (or the timeline) isn't clear. There are no effective transition words or sentences to make clear any narrative shifts in time.
A NARRATIVE DEVICE is any feature of writing that HELPS us tell our story, the common features of a text that make story telling possible. Here are a few:
COMMON NARRATIVE DEVICES:
- Temporal markers / timeline
- Characters (character development)
- Monologue / Dialogue
- Narrative Voice
- Direct address to the reader (?)